The calculation for R2 doesn't look right to me, the correct calculation can be found in the Wikipedia article I linked above.
With R1 = 10k and R2 = 4k7 the trigger voltage will be 1.6V.
As for RV and RL: I don't think you've given this enough thought, you're not supposed to copy the schematic parrot fashion but understand it and apply it what you've learnt to the problem.
With R1 = 10k and R2 = 4k7 the trigger voltage will be 1.6V.
As for RV and RL: I don't think you've given this enough thought, you're not supposed to copy the schematic parrot fashion but understand it and apply it what you've learnt to the problem.